Once when the world was in a time of peace and happiness, for her… Raven thought that she knew how love worked, but now with the state that she’s in, she had no clue…
It was a three weeks ago when I first saw him standing in the dim light of the club, I later found out his name was David… I don’t think he saw me right then, there were too many people, we were at “Bodies” a well known rock club in Detroit. I watched him talk to what I thought was his friend, but as usual I was wrong, the guy punched David, in the face, then a full blown fight broke out. This is normal when you have a bunch of drunken people in a tight space.
Well I love a good fight but as usual the club bouncers broke up the fight and kicked the guy and David out. I told my friends I was going to see what was going on outside, I was curious I wanted to know who he was, I was weirdly drawn to him. I walked up to him, he was muttering something under his breath, the other guy was gone. Then I got a clear look at him for the first time he had blue black hair and big brown eyes he had both ears pierced, and a lip piercing he was wearing a purple Hoddie and jeans, he was texting someone, I said hello he looked up at me and smiled it gave me a feeling that no other guy had before he was... amazing... beautiful in his own way, it reminded me of a rose i saw once... it had the same beauty the same light i guess one would describe it as... love at first sight? maybe... only if he felt the same way....
It was a three weeks ago when I first saw him standing in the dim light of the club, I later found out his name was David… I don’t think he saw me right then, there were too many people, we were at “Bodies” a well known rock club in Detroit. I watched him talk to what I thought was his friend, but as usual I was wrong, the guy punched David, in the face, then a full blown fight broke out. This is normal when you have a bunch of drunken people in a tight space.
Well I love a good fight but as usual the club bouncers broke up the fight and kicked the guy and David out. I told my friends I was going to see what was going on outside, I was curious I wanted to know who he was, I was weirdly drawn to him. I walked up to him, he was muttering something under his breath, the other guy was gone. Then I got a clear look at him for the first time he had blue black hair and big brown eyes he had both ears pierced, and a lip piercing he was wearing a purple Hoddie and jeans, he was texting someone, I said hello he looked up at me and smiled it gave me a feeling that no other guy had before he was... amazing... beautiful in his own way, it reminded me of a rose i saw once... it had the same beauty the same light i guess one would describe it as... love at first sight? maybe... only if he felt the same way....
Great job! Great use of words. Your way of writing really brings out the real you! Again, Great Job!
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thx dude
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